这几句英文对不对?
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热心网友
帮你稍作改动，这样读起来比较顺畅。后面的treasured显得太严重了……用
liked
就行，看你自己选择了。
Today
it
was
my
first
time
to
have
a
cup
of
tea,
which
was
special
for
me.
I
seldom
drank
tea
because
I
thought
it
was
bitter
and
expensive.
One
day
someone
told
me
about
the
Tieguanyin,
a
kind
of
tea,
tasted
slightly
sweet
and
good.
Before
the
summer
holiday,
my
friend
sent
me
many
bags
of
Tieguanyin.
I
treasured
them
because
they
came
from
my
ever
best
friend.
To
tell
you
the
truth,
the
tea
was
sweet.
热心网友
1 Several years ago, when we were only noticing the speed of the increasing in economic, we cerntainly did not know the Wall Street would bring such a big crisis to us.
2 the number of the tourists has decreased by 15 percent, with the income of tourism dropping down seriously.
3 We think countries in Latin America should come together to negotiate with the EU in exports and imports, to vindicate our vested interests.
4 we raised the housing fund of non-tenant to 5 million dollars
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改了下语法错误,但是似乎并不怎么地道
热心网友
1 Several years ago, when we were only noticing the speed of the increase in economy, we surely didn't know the Wall Street would bring such a big crisis to us.
2 the number of tourists has decreased by 15 percent, with the income of tourism dropping seriously.
3 We think countries in Latin America should come together to negotiate with the EU about exports and imports, to vindicate our vested interests.
4 we have increased the housing fund of non-tenant to 5 million dollars
热心网友
Today
was
the
first
time
I
had
a
cup
of
tea,
,which
was
special
for
me.
I
seldom
drink
tea
,
because
I
thought
it
was
bitter
and
expensive.
But
someone
told
me
the
about
the
Tieguanyin,
a
kind
of
tea
which
taste
slightly
sweet
and
good.
Before
the
summer
holiday,
my
friend
sent
me
many
small
bags
of
Tieguanyin
tea.
I
treasured
them
because
they
are
from
my
best
friend.
Oh,
how
sweet
was
the
tea!
热心网友
Today
I
had
a
cup
of
tea
,which
was
the
first
time
and
was
special
for
me.
I
seldom
drank
tea
,
because
I
thought
it
was
bitter
and
expensive,but
someone
told
me
that
Tieguanyin
,a
kind
of
tea,
tastes
slightly
sweet
and
good.
Before
the
summer
holiday,
my
friend
sent
me
many
small
bags
of
tieguanyin
tea.
I
treasured
them
because
they
were
from
my
ever
best
friend.
The
tea
was
really
sweet.
